Sunday, April 4, 2010

Poem 4: Thoracic Outlet Syndrome

Arm extended,
 eyes diverted,
reaching
for another heart 
in a wary chest.



© 2010 by Kathryn Feigal. All rights reserved. 

12 comments:

  1. oh_my_goodness.
    this made my heart leap in its wary chest.

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  2. This is wonderful ~~ as is your Dave haiku!!! Enjoy your day, Kass.

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  3. This is very good!

    PS: Thanks for visiting my blog, too. Stop by my Waffle House anytime to share a dish!

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  4. Very powerful imagery, Kass. Truly a beautiful offering. Funny, I don't avert my eyes. And I'd probably do a bit better if I were a tad more wary.

    You sure look fetching in your Easter bonnet!

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  5. good one, Kass ... very, very good!

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  6. Superb - is that a mis-placed pacemaker I do see?

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  7. JAN - Thank you.

    STANDING - Well said.

    HELEN - can't resist the Haiku impulse.

    TERRESA - you dish it out pretty good.

    LIMES - A wary heart can't really love completely, so you are on the right track. Thanks for the bonnetcomplement.

    S. ETOLE - Thanks.

    DAVE - not sure where you're looking. There's a little square thingy in there also the columns from the medical school inside the "C."

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  8. Really beautiful Kass. I like this very much ...

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  9. Your words evoke great imagery.
    quite talented, you are.
    one love.

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  10. ONE LOVE - Thank you. Love your profile pic, speaking of imagery.

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