Sunday, April 4, 2010

Poem 4: Thoracic Outlet Syndrome

Arm extended,
 eyes diverted,
reaching
for another heart 
in a wary chest.



© 2010 by Kathryn Feigal. All rights reserved. 
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12 comments:

  1. Jan4/4/10, 5:32 AM

    Beautiful, Kass

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  2. rraine4/4/10, 11:29 AM

    oh_my_goodness.
    this made my heart leap in its wary chest.

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  3. Helen4/4/10, 11:49 AM

    This is wonderful ~~ as is your Dave haiku!!! Enjoy your day, Kass.

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  4. *4/4/10, 1:27 PM

    This is very good!

    PS: Thanks for visiting my blog, too. Stop by my Waffle House anytime to share a dish!

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  5. Leslie Morgan4/4/10, 9:18 PM

    Very powerful imagery, Kass. Truly a beautiful offering. Funny, I don't avert my eyes. And I'd probably do a bit better if I were a tad more wary.

    You sure look fetching in your Easter bonnet!

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  6. S. Etole4/4/10, 11:00 PM

    good one, Kass ... very, very good!

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  7. Dave King4/5/10, 4:26 AM

    Superb - is that a mis-placed pacemaker I do see?

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  8. Kass4/5/10, 9:28 AM

    JAN - Thank you.

    STANDING - Well said.

    HELEN - can't resist the Haiku impulse.

    TERRESA - you dish it out pretty good.

    LIMES - A wary heart can't really love completely, so you are on the right track. Thanks for the bonnetcomplement.

    S. ETOLE - Thanks.

    DAVE - not sure where you're looking. There's a little square thingy in there also the columns from the medical school inside the "C."

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  9. Marius4/5/10, 11:24 AM

    Really beautiful Kass. I like this very much ...

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  10. Kass4/5/10, 2:19 PM

    Thank you, Marius.

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  11. SE'LAH...4/6/10, 6:24 AM

    Your words evoke great imagery.
    quite talented, you are.
    one love.

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  12. Kass4/6/10, 12:59 PM

    ONE LOVE - Thank you. Love your profile pic, speaking of imagery.

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